Wednesday 30 July 2008

Tremors

Hands tremble

Thoughts stir the nerves,
and,
Hands tremble.

Love.
Hate.
Joy.
Anger.
Shock.
Passion stirs thoughts,
and,
Hands tremble.

Fever.
Rheum.
Headache.
Arthritis.
Epilepsy.
Tension stirs muscles,
and,
Hands tremble.

Stirring thoughts,
Passionate emotions,
Tense muscles,
and,
Trembling hands.

Steady.
Restrain.
Relax.
Sleep...

The hands stop trembling,
Only to resume later.

3 comments:

Rosh's world said...

Hey :) Loved the style of this one. It's good one... I would have preferred the full stop not to be there in the title...

Rosh's world said...

Actually not the title its the first line... I feel it wud give more impact without a full stop there...just the first place!!! OR else just a change of tensse as in Hands trembled...just the first line...

Namitha said...

Done Rosh!
Thanks... :D